It was mentioned to me by my teacher that my model's face was slightly blurry in the billboard I presented to her before so I have used Smart Sharpen on Photoshop to sharpen the image and I think this has worked well on sharpening her facial features slightly.
My teacher also mentioned it may be worth removing the magazine name at the bottom to make it even more simplistic and I have done this and I think I may keep it this way as the website name tells us it is a magazine and if they don't get it from the term 'mag' in the url then the element of enigma may intrigue them to further research it.
One last thing that was mentioned to me when I received feedback on my billboard was that it's not clear that the model is sitting on the horse, although I know this because I have seen the other pictures where she is in a similar position, and the full image this is from. She suggested that I might want to remove the horse, and I did consider this, however, a lot of billboards use enigma to intrigue the audience and I think that this could be one of the elements that acts as an enigma for my work.
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