In my feedback from my teacher on my second page it was noted that there appeared to be a lot of 'dead space' and so I filled this with a deal alert for the region I am focusing on. I also made the 'where to get' title larger and easier to see and highlighted the product names in a different colour from the rest of the text so it s easier to pick them out for the audience.
I think overall the feedback has led to a much stronger product and I will now use this as my final piece, after talking it through with my teacher to check there is no other areas that i could improve upon.
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