It was mentioned in my chat with my teacher that my model's face was slightly blurry in the original piece of work which was quite distracting and made the work look a bit less professional. I took this criticism on board and used Smart Sharpen on Photoshop to sharpen the image (as you can see in the bottom picture). This has worked well to combat the blurry face and improves the overall look of the work. I also removed the 'Doll Up Magazine' logo at the bottom to give a more simplistic look.
I think overall the feedback has led to a much stronger product and I will now use this as my final piece, after talking it through with my teacher to check there is no other areas that i could improve upon.
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